The first crit of the project was a little unorganised on our part - we hadn't prepared for a presentation style crit, and so didn't get as much as we could have from it. This aside, there were plenty of issues raised, and the whole presentation dissolved into a bit of a debate by the end.
Issues
- How can we visualise an imagination
- It's not imaginative enough
- Confusion regarding the imaginative world of the child, and the real world in which he exists
- How is this making the child 'do something with his imagination'?
- Current visuals are too childish for the mature sense of humor of a 9 year old.
But most importantly, what we later realised is...
No one likes being told what to do, especially a child of 9
We needed a dramatically different approach to this brief, the concept wasn't what we thought is was - and without a strong foundation to build upon, the rest of the project just isn't going cut it.
Back to the drawing board.
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